Vuni - Top Tip For Smart User

WALT: Write Top Tip For Smart User

Hi I will be talking about Top Tip For Smart User and what was challenging for me. for the Top Tip we need to create a poster for CyberSmart. the challenging part was I don't know what to put on the google drawing so I came up with this. An other challenging bit was I know Top Tip should I use so I use simple ones. thanks for listening. leave a comment Bye 😁  

Vuni - EXPLANATION WRITING

EXPLANATION WRITING

Introducing the S.E.E. structure

S	Statement - Use a starter sentence to state a cause - To be a great Tamaki student, you need to...
E	Explain - Define the cause - this means . . .
E	Evidence - explain the effect of the cause - if you do that then . . .

Make sure you USE YOUR PLAN to help guide your writing!

Title What is your explanation topic about?	How can we show Manaakitanga to our environment?
Introduction What are you going to explain? Write 2 facts about the topic. Suggestion: 1 fact about the the importance of Manaakitanga. 1 fact about the Tamaki environment.	We Show Manaakitanga to the environment by caring about the waters and the people . Tamaki  Includes , Glen Innes , Panmure and in G.I .There are Different cultures are around here that share the environment.
Paragraph One S - State your first key idea E - Explain and elaborate on your key idea. E - provide examples that relate to your key idea.	Pick Up Rubbish In your Streams , Lakes , Rivers and on land in your neighbourhood . For Example , People should start caring for the land as well .And to back it up , Start bringing people together for the clean up . The more people there is , the faster it can end
Paragraph Two S - State your first key idea E - Explain and elaborate on your key idea. E - provide examples that relate to your key idea.	Help in the community and stop pollution . For Example , we should start looking for rubbish and start caring for the environment . To Back It up , Get more people to help so the waterways become healthier .
Paragraph Three S - State your first key idea E - Explain and elaborate on your key idea. E - provide examples that relate to your key idea.	Create a poster that warns people about what is going on and get them to help . For Example , Create more than one poster , so everyone gets the message that we’re trying to send .To back it up , Warn people about what is happening around the world about pollution .
Conclusion The conclusion sums up all the ideas and repeats a key message to end.  This could be a recommendation or a personal connection.	A Healthy Environment : Finally , if all goes well , we’ll be living in a healthy environment suitable for wildlife as well as us because of the people’s contribution to the cleanup .

WALT: write about explanation writing

Hi my name is Vuni and today I will be talking about explanation writing and what I found challenging. explanation writing is when you explain what you write. I found challenging was I had to come up with ideas and put it on the explanation writing plan with my friend LJ. Thanks for listening. leave a comment Bye. 😁   

Vuni - Digital Dig

WALT: Complete this digital dig

HI my name is Vuni and today I will be talking about Digital Dig but first I will be talking about what I found challenging. What I found challenging was slide 13. I found challenging about it because I had to find how many time it spell chromebook. Thanks for listening. leave a comment. Bye 😁

Vuni - 2D Models Compare and Contrast

Vuni - Eels

WALT: learn something about eels

Vuni - My Math Work

WALT: Solve the problem and the answers down. 

Vuni - The Secret Life of Estuaries

WALT: write what is the main idea about the secret life of estuaries.

Vuni and Sene - Pollution

Vuni - Concept Ideas For Jewellery

Hi Today we went to tamaki college for technology. for technology I had to finish my Concept Ideas, we had to draw four things that you are making for, I drawed 3d hole, Goten, Sans and a pokeball. After I finish I had to pick a picture so I picked the pokeball. My technology teacher Ms Ferguson gave us a big piece of paper. After we had to draw the outside of the shape first. Second we have to try to make it in 3d. Third we have to draw a 3d disc and the 3d shape inside it. Fourth we have to shape cut of the circle to make a good outside shape. Thank you for listening, leave a comment BYE :)